Greeting Josh Fui & I enjoyed your poem about the sea. I Really like how you drew a picture of a ship in the water and the sunset in the background. l really like your poem because light blue shine in the morning.
Hi Josh I think this poem about the Ocean is very lovely because it tells me a lot about the Ocean, I also think that the picture is very interesting because it's showing the Ocean, But I think you should add seagulls on the picture because I don't see any. Great Work Josh.
Your poem was interesting and fun to read because you best described the sea. I like how you added a picture of the sea because then it gave a mind set of whats happening. Keep it up!
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ReplyDeleteGreeting Josh
ReplyDeleteFui & I enjoyed your poem about the sea. I Really like how you drew a picture of a ship in the water and the sunset in the background. l really like your poem because light blue shine in the morning.
Keep it up.
Hi Josh
ReplyDeleteI think this poem about the Ocean is very lovely because it tells me a lot about the Ocean, I also think that the picture is very interesting because it's showing the Ocean, But I think you should add seagulls on the picture because I don't see any. Great Work Josh.
Greetings Josh,
ReplyDeleteYour poem was interesting and fun to read because you best described the sea. I like how you added a picture of the sea because then it gave a mind set of whats happening. Keep it up!